Overall I think my happiness essay looks very good. Not only did I elaborate on the topic and concept but I also looked at my grammar, spelling, and organization of my essay. Global changes I made from the first and final draft were that I elaborated on the authors and talked about each authors piece of work instead of jumping into my argument. I also looked at my in text citations and fixed them. Lastly, I changed the organization of my writing and added another paragraph for how each of the authors arguments apply to my life. The local and global workshops benefited me in a positive way because in high school we never peer- edited each others work so It was definitely different for me when we did it in class these couple of weeks but it helped when revising my essay.