I have learned and polished many active reading strategies while being in english 110 this semester. In my anatomy and physiology class I…

For my second essay of the semester, I wrote about how technology affects children.   first draft  final draft 

I have made many strides in the global end of my essay. Using the ideas from my peers I have decided to reread…

I have attached my framing statement to this post.

I have attached my first rough draft to this post.

I have added a pdf of the two essays I peer edited during the global peer editing workshop.   Elliot’s Maggie’s 

Two things I want to improve on for the next essay is both my grammar and following the  topic for the essay. I…

Essay Draft 1- Peer Review -2

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Um0L2sZ4fHQdbWJdYN1fLHI5_W-GQuXCcDUhUtv54RM/edit

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1vORSF2JsuxyL0xCSwHs-Qksn-Ao_n6bOgxx8vRSBr90/edit