After having my other peers review my essay I have a new understanding of what to fix on my essay so that it flows better. I need to reread what I write so that it runs smoothly. I had a couple comments about how this sentence didn’t sound write and after reading it it didn’t so I will read my essay again and provide a stronger sentence. I also need to provide more quotes from the authors so that it provides enough evidence for the readers to understand my claim. This peer review really helped me to make my last essay stronger.