Two things I want to improve on for the next essay is both my grammar and following the  topic for the essay. I noticed in my essay that there were a lot of grammatical errors in  and one of the reasons of that is that I tend to not read my essay after I finish writing it. I need to reread my essay after I write it so that every sentence runs smoothly throughout my essay. the second thing I need to work on so that my second essay is better is that I need to look over the topic more so that I address everything that the topic says. In my essay I didn’t add all the authors in my essay so I didn’t follow the topic all the way. For the next essay I am going to go over the topic a couple of times and then outline everything I want to add in my essay but make sure that everything is included.